Weird weather
And i am plotting our future
(Cigarette half lit)
The stale smoke reminds me of the ashtray laying next to your bed
Plucking roaches from half empty cigarette boxes
Shit to do
(i breathe)
I miss your bad habits.
I miss you.
The phone goes dead she's gone again.
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Written September 3rd, 2005
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stark and amazing, the lines in the parentheses is an interesting effect that i enjoy, i really think this is great.
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really then you should check out my other stuff most of them are written in train of thought.
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wow, that's actualy really good. i just felt like i was in LA while reading it.
very short, but you really get your thoughts out. i really like realism poems, i think this is awesome.
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Hehe..I wanted to do that too, but this was an awesome piece.
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thanx for the comment
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