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I just want to cry!



have you ever thought about what
it feels like to be surrounded by a
crowd of people, but somehow you
still feel alone?

it's like when you are in the middle
of the ocean. yea, sure, you are surrounded
by water and fishes, but aren't you STILL
alone?

on my birthday, my family congratulated me
and they gave me presents,but all the presents
in the world couldn't make up for what they did
to me. they made me cry like i have never cried
before, they made me feel like crap, and most
importantly, they made me hate them with a
passion. i didn't even know what to do about it.

i just want to cry! i want to CRY until i died!
i wanted to cry until it felt better! i wanted
people to leave me the hell alone!

i just wanted to say " BACK OFF! it's bad enough
you made me cry, now you aren't going to let
me leave my life?!? GET AWAY! i just want to
be alone. can't you understand?! i don't want to
go out, and i don't want to talk to you on the phone!
i just don't want to talk about it! for the last time:
                LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
                      i just want to cry...

 

Author notes

by the way august 31st was my birthday(for anyone who cares)
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • preciouscatie
    September 6, 2005
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    awesome

    omg hey juana its me cat and natalia wow we both are really sorry 4 what happened that day but remember never doubt to give me a call or rest your head on my shoulder and cry no matter what you will alwayz have friends like us to be by your side whether its good bad we a;wayz have your baq well my lovely friend life is rough and though but together we will conquer it all ok well sweetie hope you feel better and remember im alwayz here well the 3 of us duh!!!!!k.i.t love ya alwayz giggles,fuzzy,and waffle aka dee bye cuddle bunny

  • MisCherryDee
    September 5, 2005
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    omg juana wow im sorry u cried on ur birthday what they did was rong but dont worry it'll come baq and bite them in the ass im sorry sweety u had to have a birthday like that love the poem
    luv yalotts
    Darling