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Ignite the Flame

Unconscious heart gasping for breath
Reaching for your love

Calling out your name
As an echo of confusion passed over

A cold mind hollows into darkness
But I know of the warmth you hide inside

The warm glow burning in your eyes
Now grown cold over time

All I ask....



Who can ignite the flame?

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Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Screaming Chimera
    October 6, 2005
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    I love this Poem, its short but effective.
    thanks for commenting on my story so long ago.
    SC xXx
    Edited on Oct 06, 5:04 p.m. because ''.


  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    September 3, 2005
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    This is absolutly brilliant! I love it to bits!
    ~Sarah