What have you done?
I am the worn and broken
pieces of a forgotten heart
ripped to shreds at your feet.
Why do your own tears fall on me?
Follow your heart
to the place where I am
and where we used to be.
What did I do?
My eyes and nose are red.
If they looked like they felt,
my tears would be too.
Why did it have to be?
I won't mind
in a few short days.
I can feel the scar tissue forming.
When will it end?
Don't bother chasing after.
I'm too far out of sight.
I'm too far gone.
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...Sarah left me...
Written September 3rd, 2005
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This poem is very good and it is sad i almost cried. Don't worry things will tend to get better.
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Beautifully sad..........Hugs to you and it will get better. Thanks for sharing.
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excellent writing
This is sad. You express your disappointment and hurt well with the words you have chosen. I am glad to see that you can move on. Be well poet.
etherealforou
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This is so sad. But there is so much emotion in it. Im sorry. But I like the style that it is written in. Later.
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Thanks. You are so kind. It helps alot to hear such nice things. Thanks again.
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O.O ohmygoodness..i'm so sorry! i...i simply cant imagine why any girl would leave you like that.....hugs this is a wonderful poem, as always. every time i read your work i'm impressed.
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cheer up my buttercup!
Aww... i'm so sorry.
No words i say will help, but i hope you take into account the fact that i am truly sorry
This poem has a structure i like, the question then stanza method. I think that's great. Yes, great poem. Sad tale, so sorry. Take time to comfort thyself, you deserve it
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