I am an official Allpoetry nut!
From work, I come home to my studio "hut",
Turn on my computer, and sit in my chair,
Then stay there for hours with glazed-over stare,
Critiquing and commenting on poems I read,
And IMing "fam'ly" if there is a need,
While hunting down contests best-suited for me.
('Cause I want to win a gold trophy, you see!)
And though I'm addicted, I find great release
In sharing my faith and it's God-given peace,
For if there's one message I want to convey,
It's that my Lord Jesus is the only way!
And so, life continues day-out and day-in...
When school's out I say, "Let the writing begin!",
For though my back's aching, and sore is my butt,
I am an official Allpoetry nut!
Author notes
Just thought I'd try something personal and humorous! Enjoy!
Written September 3rd, 2005
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Nutty Nettie
This is great... LOL I now know the true you. I know why you don't answer the phone, or come to the door, or finish you school work LOL JK. This is good. I agree some of the rhyme was forced but it still fit great so who cares. LOL
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You're right, this one is good
. The glazed stare, the trophy lust.. it's all so true! It makes me want to get more active on this site, like I used to be. And thanks for the gigantic review on my poem, it gave me the warm fuzzies.
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Aww I really like this piece it was cute fun and witty. This place has me wrapped around its little typing finger It was a pleasure to read this, Nice flow and rhyme and a smile has been painted in my face
Savina
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WONDERFUL POEM
Oh this is so great. What a joy to read. You sound like me. I love all poetry. I was lead to God on here last year by live4eternity. And I have the most wonderful AP family on here. It keeps getting bigger each week. You are a wonderful poet. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy 
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This is really cute! And I can so relate. If Im anywhere near a computer, Im always on AP. And if Im at work, the only place I am computer-less, Im always thinking about it. ITS ALWAYS ON MY MIND!
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this did bring a tear to my as i won't be spending all day and night here... had to go out and get a real job
it obviously weighs heavy on my mind after not working for three years... medical reasons 
anyhoo... i loved this! fantastic rhyme that was smooth and not forced. this was just a plain fun poem to read... and oh so true
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LOL ^_^ I think we are all nuts together >.> What's terrible is when you are at school thinking "Wow I'd love to put this poem on AP, but I'm nowhere near a computer>< Great poem!! ^__^
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Lmao, dude, just...dude, awsome
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hahaha... i guess this poem describes a lot of here ... ya i am an AP nut as well... glad to have someone finally write something about it
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Hehe, cute. The rhyming is good, although in part is was a little forced. Basically, it flowed quite well
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Lol! I really like this, so very true, well are nuts! wonderful job, and thanks for a good laugh, best of luck to you
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this is a nice write and will have to agree with touch there are alot of in the bowl the flow was good and rhyme solid. I will have to say one line:It's that my Lord Jesus is the only way!... is quite typical one those that believe there faith is the only way when many faiths/beliefs have stood the test of time far longer than christianity. For all beliefs are basically the same and as "right" as any other they all start with a creator and all end with getting to live your life as close to unconditional love as possible just different paths to get from the start to the end..... nice write
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I love it! I think you are in good company so don't be hogging the bowl, eh? Make room for the rest of us. We are a bowl of the finest mixed nuts that money cannot buy!
Thank you for the much appreciated giggles.
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~~~Touchof1der~~~
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Edited on Sep 03, 1:44 p.m. because ''.
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