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Forelorning was her look to me
Usurped from her position
Callous was her attitude
Kicked down from penetration
Ignorant, the vile fools
Not feeling remorse at all
'I know she didn't care,' said they
As they watched her cry and fall

She looked to me through poison eyes
Heaven help me if she stood
I couldn't bear to look at her
Thus, I turned away, like she knew I would

Did she curse me in her silence?
Abhored by my decision
My tired body looked away
Not aware o' the venomous friction
I didn't mean to try her
Thinking not of her conviction

Of course it was in vain
Having loved myself
Excellently she had ruled
Lovely queen, now stuck on the shelf
Leave her be, was all I thought
When I turned away to leave
I had stolen her seat of power
That was the epitome of glee
Had it happened another way
I wouldn't really care
The crown was on my head now
Ah-ha, my lovely queen's disdaining glare!
Lo and behold, she grabbed my ankle
Leaving me frozen there

She had loved her little toy
Cared much more than she really could
Raped by he and his subordinates
Entities surrounded her; it happened, like she knew it would
With a gentle kick, I threw her off my leg
I felt no sorrow for her loss
Though my stomach felt sickly from the rape

Frolicked to the palace
Under the bright blue sky
Catteryowling reached my ears
Kick to my head, but I knew not whom or why

Course it had to happen
Under God's great power
Not had I expected
To be struck down by such a lovely flower

Author notes

((Please review))
I wrote this one day in Algebra when I was feeling bummed out. The narrator, basically, raped the queen with a few of his friends, left her to die, so he could steal the thrown, but on the way back to claim his post, she came up behind him, and kicked him dead... :3
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Lil Wolfie
    September 10, 2005
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    Amazingly great! \m/

    ... ... Duuuuuuuuuuude... You've got me speechless... WoW.. It's an amazing poem... You have a wonderful talent as a writer. Ye shall go far!