The innocence that lies within your lost soul
In cause of the burning rose aloft in the wind
The silhouette formed a gaping void within me
I surrender unto the enshadowed sullen darkness
The daze of your neverending beauty shines me
All I want to do is please your heart and mind
As your eyes gaze unto my own and arising
Of the love I have for your soul
The angelic possession of your grasp
Is as if a Seraph has glazen me
Take me into your wings and we fly away
For I do know you are an angel
Do not rue me for I love you so
I breathe only because of your existence
For the world bows before your presence
The universe shall know you, lest it be exiled
The moonlight kisses the wine-soaked night
For it is you that walks among it's magick
I grant you most anything you want
For it is you that recreated Garden Of Eden
You are the rechristened Eve
The innocence is no longer seduced or corrupted
I love you so much with all the world and more
So come to me and give me life
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Written September 3rd, 2005
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Thanks, glad you loved my poem. No, I write poetry a little different, and the way I spelled "magic" is "magick". I liked the way it looks better. (I spell valor, valour and flavor, flavour) I am weird like that.
Live on and live again. Cya -
Wow, so beautiful. "The innocence that lies within your lost soul" would have to be my favorite line (and of course it's the first so that makes a good clincher
) I can feel the love seeping from this write and I'm so glad that you entered my contest. I'm not sure, but magick the seventh line from the bottom is supposed to be magic, right? Maybe not. That's the only error I could find. This is a well written, beautiful poem. Awsome job and good luck in my contest. 
~TST~
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