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Wine-soaked Rose

I saw your silhouette in the moonlight
The nocturnal of your soul is desirable to me
I want you where you stand
For we will recreate the Garden Of Eden
As you are the rechristened Eve
Romance means nothing to me if you are not in existence
Come to me, I love you, allow us gilded and more
I love you with every drop of blood in darkness
No more am I sullen around you
The fervor is stronger than any negative feeling
For your kiss is wine-soaked and much serene
Given into your silhouette, the midnight waits
I love thee
I need thee
My rose seeps my blood into your veins
For I romance you into my self-prison
We are free
We are eternal
For you and I are the lost lovers of the world
Without I never live, I die
I love you with this wine-soaked rose
And forever we are in passion, we are in love
You redefine love in my presence
For we are in love

I will die for you
Because I love you

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Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • buffytheparrotslaye
    September 5, 2005
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    Romantic

    The days of Wine and Roses.Some nice imagery especially as depicted in Garden of Eden.Felt a little forced at times and needed some extra creative word usage to give it a more powerful kick.However a nice read and Good Luck in the Contest


  • ceXee
    September 5, 2005
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    really well written, ive got some competition out there . good luck


  • crivanea silver member
    September 3, 2005
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    awww...that's soooo sweet....cute..but not sure if it was a definition..lol..but i love the reference u use to the bibile..and i like the way u use romance...not bad..wish u luck!