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Voodoo Magik

Voodoo Magik

Lemon lime, so sugary good.

The silvery taste, drips freely, like water on the wood.

It's like the smell of summer camp, when its closed down for the year.

You know you should'nt taste the love, kinda like it's liquid fear.

The shimmery sparkles, The white code lines.

Melted chocolate in a microwave,
Explodes like brain cells popping in our minds.

Your heart feels like its caving, your mind races with deep dreams.

The bright lights and music, hardcore like silverscreens.

Knowledge of this feeling, numb like spider legs on plates.

Count the golden stars, we've reached our HERION gates.

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Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Phreaxxor
    September 25, 2005
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    a 13-14 year old telling me about herion.
    What make's you think you can tell me what I can and cannot write about? And if you're going to reply back saying "hey look! I made you freak out again!" Don't. If there's one thing I will not tollerate is someone telling me what I "should" write about. Or how they "wish I knew what herion does." Because I do know what herion does to someone. I've lived with, grown up with it, and visualized it all my life.

    Just so ya know, cupcake, it's called an "Abstract" poem. Why don't you try readin' about them, then give me whatever opinion you have.