You wooed me poetically through my poetry
beautiful words you used melted my heart,
friends we became at first then love crept in.
Honey you would call me ever so sweetly.
Words of love we spoke about each day
fell in love with you as I never have before,
then you began to absent yourself from me
months passed each time you went away.
Without communication there is no love for
it cannot flourish, I begged you to speak
but you ignored my pleas so many times!
"My honey" you said to me "it's you I adore."
I'd had enough, I was through with you
stay away please! I don't love you anymore.
Months passed, I fell in love with another
who gave me the security and love so true.
You came back told me you loved me deeply
I told you I loved another he was my life now,
bared your heart to me, said your love was true
forget me I no longer care, you became so angry.
It's too late, I won't give up the love I have now
you had your chance but you threw it away.
I know it hurts, as I've been there too! remember?
Accept it for it's over! you'll find a way some how.
Author notes
I chose number 5
5. Tell about an experience where you've had to let the love of your life go, about how it came to happen, and the emotions you had to deal with.
I commented on "After Glow" by Dawn Lee"
I commented and applauded on your poem "Blessed Dreamland"
Written September 3rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Bringing Back the Love. by stardustedroses.
400 points, ended September 15, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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At least you came and commented Abdul, that's the main thing, it makes me happy when my Friends visit.
Jennifer
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there are much that i ahve eft behind u are greet write nie words again i rersaly like it all thew way u write n i have miss alot here 4 not reading ur work
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Thank you Herman for your wonderful comment, I have learnt the hard way. I have moved on and will never go back.
Jennifer
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Yes Yem, he will survive, just as I have, there's no going back for me, just forward, on to a better, more secure life.
Jennifer
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A very great write full with so many deep emotions. love loneliness anger. But you seem to be a person that knows what choices to make in life. You learn it the hard way. The feeling of dissapointment is one you know. I think you deserve the best One that have you as the midle point of the circle of life. Hugs Herman
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Oh my, this contest will get a million entries. We've all been kicked in the teeth by love before! You know, this critter you write about will survive. He's already proven yourself to not be trustworthy, I'm sure he'll go back to doing whatever it was he did during his absenses. Good for you for not falling for mere words.
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beautiful
WOW this is amazing, you have a lot of talent. the flow was awesome. Best of luck in the contest. -
I have been there too. I loved the imagery in this piece. It flowed great. You put me right there with you. Beautifully done. Good luck inthe contest.
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Excellent! I have been here...I mean exactly the same situation. And recently! Oy! I was with the guy for over a year...7 months of that time spent crying myself to sleep each night, thinking I wasn't worthy. Finally got over that when he again became silent, ignored my messages...and I found another. Wonderful sentiment! Thank you so much for entering and good luck!
Always,
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you are so right, as that's what has been happening, he wouldn't accept it, so I told him to forget about me and he got angry, but at least he's leaving me alone now
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To put yourself through hell again and I am certain that they will only neglect you time and time again. Follow your heart and fill it with the love for your special someone.... leave and do not even look back at the one who caused so many tears to fall from your eyes... and enjoy life with your new found love.. for life is far to short not to enjoy...
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Only three stars.........AWWWWWWWWWW Vic......couldn't you give me five? I'll say it's you if you do
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Thank you Ed for your wonderful comment, I will take your advice and listen to my heart, I won't put myself through that heartache again, he has to understand that. I am with the one I love as you know and I will not hurt him.
'zzzzzz
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Where have you been Vic? YOU my friend have been neglecting ME!
You have done nothing wrong my little Chickadee
and I'm still you Pluff pluff spongy doll
I lovesya my friend 
Jenni
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You write with the power of your heart and put so much of ourself into each poem, that it is very easy to feel everything you put into them. This poem is no exception. You have to turn away someone who once loved you and possessed your heart, but after time they neglected you and you found someone worthy of your love and your heart. I think if you follow your heart you will always be happy.... The picture you posted with this poem adds to the true beauty of the love you write about...
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3 Stars ***
huh... reading you after days... and then i get to read a heartbroken poem... naw actually heart broken.. cos you later find another guy .... but still.. umm.. yes.. we ca say its a sad write... humn.. now yes the new guy you find is me.. and the old guy i wont wanna discuss
.. so here is a huge for my pluff pluff bussy spongey doll... u seem to be busy these days.. especially no msgs for me 
if i done anything wrong.. then u ought punish me.. but tell me whats the reason..otay?
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing my dear friend
hugs and kisses
gives choco
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend....... just keep it up............ your humble little friend.........
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.............. .............. - vic ( who else??? )
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