If I were dying
I would say,
"I love you all very much."
Which is why
I love you all
very much.
Author notes
"penguins only dream in black and white"
I find your poetry overall really interesting; though I am not a Christian and maybe can't relate to it as well as a Christian would, I still find it to be very enlivening, readable stuff.
Written September 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- not important by Lucian Valcor.
875 points, ended September 23, 2005, 39 entries
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Its very odd... for years I have had the phrase "I love you all very much" in mind for my last words, whenever and wherever they are spoken. Not even sure why. Kinda eery!
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Simple and rather beautiful! It's good to know that you're full of love...cool.
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very nice words to share nice one
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very nice words to share nice one
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awww...very nice
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Glad you enjoyed the poem... worked HARD on it lol
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Nice work, This was really unique, It was very powerful and yet very short , It was really effective , Nicely spread about and structured, Very good work
Luv Jordan x -
thanks, and yeah, nifty background huh? i think it fits pretty well, thanks for reading the poem!
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thanks for the commment about my poetry. this was short but it still said alot. i loved the background by the way. nice job!
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