Drifting abroad in this lifeboat memory,
the paddle slips and obligatory is all that we can see.
As this stand-off comes to an end,
wanted like a bullet to the brain, his deadly rain of lead comes calling,
and in the slow motion tragedy he comes falling,
so the ground is it'd neutral stance opens wide,
and fall between the loins.
Author notes
still not happy with it, but its better;..............
Written September 2nd, 2005
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only one problem: "obligatory" is an adjective. "obligation" is a noun.
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