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Mary



Mary

Holy Venus -
Virginal Concubine -

Inciting heinous, satanic yearnings
Nothing so wholly divine as 'love'.

Let cherubim and seraphim
Sing to the pathetic pawns of Lucifer
Spectres in human form.

Maternal malefactor -
True descendant of Eve -

Intrinsic to womankind
Strength enough in your felicitous ways
to subdue man, seduce the Deity
and violate the purest paragon - Paradise.


M.E.R.

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  • DizzyLizzy
    September 2, 2005
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    Hi, as I said in my comments, this was just a play on words and ideas.

    M.E.R. - that is my initials.

    Thanks for your comments.
    Diz

  • piccola silver member
    September 2, 2005
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    did yu hav another mary in mind..?

    mary


  • XCaramelxSweetieX69
    September 2, 2005
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    I like this poem a lot, but to be honest with you I don't really understand it as much as I'd like to. I can't wait to check more of your work out soon though. Good job, Jessica.

  • brainiac
    September 2, 2005
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    Arresting, perplexing

    Well, I think the writing is very vivid and precise, and it comes to a great climax. However, I'm not quite sure what the Blessed Virgin Mary (or the idea of her) has done to deserve this. What is M. E. R. short for?