Hold me in your arms, leave me not
for you are the love that I cherish.
I beg you come lay by my side
I cannot let you out of my life.
Stay with me.
I adore you above all others
deep in my heart I know you care.
You came to me of your own accord
does that not speak volumes of love?
Stay with me.
Absolute love is yours to keep
your kisses thrill me beyond belief.
Come sweet love let me take your hand
your eyes tell me my love is returned.
Stay with me.
Author notes
Written September 2nd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Slap me in the face with love by Jessica Wright.
300 points, ended September 2, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you my dear friend Abdul for your kind comment, I love writing about love, it's a wonderful emotion.
jennifer
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a little word with much explanation to such a tremedious writitng well this, word are quite small bye they hold sway
i think u are going tyo be one of the best poet that deal much on love writting -
This is beautifully written from the heart.
It is a wonderful but painful feeling to be with someone and not wanting to let them go, Ros -
awesome
nice job here.. this was a touching love poem..
i love this part
Stay with me.
Absolute love is yours to keep
your kisses thrill me beyond belief.
Come sweet love let me take your hand
your eyes tell me my love is returned.
Stay with me.
great write.. thanks for sharing your work with me.. -
AWWWWWWWW thank you Vic you know you are the man in my life my little chickadee.
Lovesya Jenni
Edited on Sep 03, 8:51 because ''. -
5 Stars *****
pluff pluff spongey doll needs to make such lovely romantic poems rather than sad poems
... and i think u still got the same old problem in you. ... WHY DO u ALWAYS FORGET TO SAY YOUR GOOD POEMS ARE DEDICATED TO ME 
anyways.. this is goody woody write write.. and i am giving 5 stars cos imma liking it.. and i love YOU writing it
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing my dear Pluff Pluff spongey BUSY doll
hugs and kisses
gives choco
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend....... just keep it up............ your humble little friend.........
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.............. .............. - vic ( who else??? )
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Thank you Ed for your kind comment, I appreciate you dropping by to visit me.
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The words Stay with me speak volumes..... The story of such love is hard to find, but your poetry only sings with it so very naturally. I think you did a wonderful job writting this poem and the love you put into it... is very special...
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Thanks Til, but it would've been nice if the contest runner had read it before she judged the contest. It's not the winning part, it's just common courtesy, that's one good thing about GOLD membership, you can see who visits your page.
Love Jenn
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great write!!!!! it was very sweet, i felt all warm n fuzzy when i was rading it well done.
The imagery was great also, it was beautiful and was perfect for this piece.
Til -
Thank you Guardian Angel for your wonderful comment.
Jennifer.
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i love this. absolutely exquisitely written....i love the flow and i love the love expressed.
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AWWWWWWWW Silly me thanks Maria
Jennifer
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i said sap in the face becuz the contest is called, "slap me in the face with love"
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Thank you Ray Von for your wonderful comment, but I don't understand the slap in the face bit? I really appreciate you stopping by.
Jennifer
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Thank you Echo for your wonderful comment, thank you for dropping by.
Jennifer
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Well I certanly got a really hard slap in the face!! ahh now that is a true love poem, well done and good luck in the contest!!!
Maria -
beautiful poem
Very nice poem about love. it kind of made me think of the families who's spouses are over sea and how they must feel when they can finally be in one anothers arms. I don't know why I was thinking that, maybe i'ts just wha't been on my mind this morning. -
Red Roan 3 minutes ago
You Gotta Want it. 74 critiques, 43 poems. Currently online. said:
this is a very eloquent plea for someone to stay. Beautiful write-Roan
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