The delicate art
Of joining two souls and hearts:
Known mainly as "love."
It's something of depth,
Of tender understanding,
And the will to give.
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I don't know.
Written September 1st, 2005
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Awwwwwww, this is such a sweet poem, and the haiku is perfect, exactly 5 7 5, nice one, and with 2 verses, that works well to
Great poem ocne again and good luck in the contest
best wishes as always
-Cool Oasis-
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Oh yay a new poem! I have been so incredibly busy during the past few months, that it took a cancelled class to get me to log on here and as I have nothing else to do on a friday afternoon while school is still in session. But I'm glad that I could finally read something new of yours!
I noticed the haikus right off the bat, so hopefully I'm not too dusty on everything poetry-related. And the way that you described love was perfect- joining two hearts and souls... that really is what happens, but I suppose that I just haven't though of it like that specifically. Strings of haikus are always great, and I hope that you add more! -
Raee!!! It's been awhile since you posted a poem...I agree with Tara that this doesn't really need a last stanza. I think you got your message across pretty well. It's deep but a meaning that everyone can understand. Nicely said chum. I like the haiku style thingy. Great job!! Well, have fun in Nh and stuff. c ya!
~Chumby~*~
by the way...YOU STILL HAVE A DOG!
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Thank you for that incredibly intelligent comment
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