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Melanoma - Sonnets #XIV & #XV

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Sonnet  XIV

 

Whilst underneath the melanoma state,

small plebs connive in perforated mass

evolve, which stay unsolved until sedate

has given it the manifest surpass.

It pleads a silent stare with retribute,

to firm the globuled vex of wry enslave

to sweet divide that substance in pursuit

of mercy that one's source cannot behave.     

A thinly shred of evidence has burst  

the eye for seeing why the all too soon,

has gathered, not exceedingly rehearsed 

when wary not to shade the fullest noon.

I'd rather be the structure of benign,

than have the fate self sown as duly thine.

 

Sonnet XV

 

It overhangs the thread of thence beware

distrupting all indemnities at source

now living the disguise of unaware

each stage acquired to being there of course.

Peruse the state that slightly says impaled,

has whimpered not on effigies of cult,

but sinister it seems and therefore veiled

comeuppance be the likeliest result;

I offer you the rid of one's demise,

so urgently bequeathed to you unsoured,

and firm by the derision - cicatrize,

is hopeful that perchance has been devoured.

Prevention than the cure can mighty vane,

acceptance be to worship-wise archane.  

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Written January 11th, 2003

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  • MargaretG
    August 4, 2005
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    You have quite a way with words, Titus, it sounds terrific, even though I'm sure half the meaning is flying over my head. However, it feels bleak.
    Dealing with what I can, I suggest that the possessive form of nature needs an apostrophe. You present a new word for me, pestulence, and it is highly evocative, combining pestilence and pustulant.
    This is an old one. Blame the RTF!


  • Cream22
    June 24, 2005
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    souldefying

    you have recieved my comment I hope if not I found this one utterly facinating you have rendered me speachless *curtsies* thank m'lord for sharing your gift


  • kittykatface
    September 2, 2004
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    I loved this poem. It had such a... tone in it that you couldn't read it any way you like, you PUSHED that tone onto the reader whether they liked it or not, which I think is totally awsome. Your poetry has skill, form, depth, truth, pain, love, longing and thought in it, something too many poets on this site are missing. Reading something like this is refreshing, appealing and a major improvement over the usual crap I'm forced to read. Amazing.

    --Anna--


  • froglover80
    February 5, 2003
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    and hell is but a fear your darkest hour

    now you have so much truth there...I have to agree with odeon8...I am amazed by your work, and why I havent discovered you before...you give such meaning and depth into something to serene yet complicated thought....very provoking of my mind...~~Jenn


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 13, 2003
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    excellent

    this is great, I like it alot, of course I am metaphysical so I would hehehe. well done for sure, blessed be

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