Together holding hands
in the sunset
noticing only one another
walking down lovers lane
Sparkles of starlight
shine in their eyes
nothing matters at that moment
walking down lovers lane
A magical moment
as their lips meet
on a night under the stars
walking down lovers lane
~Lady Raven~
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Written September 1st, 2005
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Bravo!
Wonderful cadance, fine poem, excellent! -
A Look back at Innocence.
Very romantic piece, agreed! Set in what appears to be from decades past, the old image reminds us of what innocence we have lost- but that this poetry re-captures. A time when romance was elegant, and polite and somewhat giddy...I love your imagery here and the look of two in love gazing into starlight-reflection of their eyes, even as the sun has not set, the romance flows and glistens from what appears to have been an afternoon rain...and seeing the two holding hands tenderly in affection. You words cultivated all that was "once good and could be again." (James Earl Jones- "Field of Dreams.") Beautiful. -
aww.. such a wonderful and romantic piece
lovely written
well done
I love reading this one
Angel
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Beautiful and you can feel the crisp air of the night under the
stars the refreshing calmness is awsome so peaceful and the tranquility is breath taking and the picture mwa perfect to the
Last kiss and the essence of holding the dream for ever..
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