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Tiny Soul

Scared to death
Dont know what to do
Not sure if everyone should know
Hoping to God I dont show

Seeing your tiny heartbeat
On a screen in a room
Feeling a rush of relief
Cant wait to hold you

Nothing matters but you now
I just want to do everything right
Help you grow healthy
And larger in size

April seems so far away
The anticipation is overwelming
Your my baby and I love you
No matter what happens with anyone else

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Written September 1st, 2005

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  • lilb420
    November 18, 2005
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    oh congrats
    Edited on Nov 18, 11:29 because ''.

  • Dday50126
    September 4, 2005
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    total and complete love

    My God, can there be anything in this whole wide world that can put everything into it's proper place than fiding that you are going to have a baby? I am male yes but i know the elation of hearing i was going to be a daddy. You have put into words here the most beautiful precious show of love for an new life growing inside of you. What a blessing beyond words you have written Thank you for sharing and giving this smile to me...