When the world is doomed,
When there is light no more,
When all you have is pain,
Remember me
I will always be there for you.
When the sky is clear,
When the stars are bright,
When your smile is wide,
Remember me
I will always be there for you.
When there is nothing special,
When the days are dull,
When you are bored,
Remember me,my friend
I will always be there for you.
I will stand by you in pain,in joy;
We were meant to be together,
Then,Now and Ever more!!
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Dedicated to all my friends!!
Written September 1st, 2005
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Such beautiful thoughts have been captured and formed into a lovely poem. Bravo!
Mariana
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The equation of love is not applicable to ant fixed rules of the world.It kneel down the logic,breaks the lines and captivates hearts!
Talking about feelings sounds too hard for me but you always can do that.It’s so good.I enjoy it.
Golden days are waiting for you..so forget the coldness of this winter.Snow will melt away soon and green spring will come with the buds of success.
Be vernal...like a vernal leaf.
~Massy~
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*gasp* I havent commented on this yet? hmm... odd.. I remeber reading it... anyways... his was simply beautiful... it comes secong only to ure "golden butterfly" (and thats because of the chice of topic) anyways dahling... it felt wonderful to read ure stuff... come bak soon.. missing ya
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i wish that there were more people like you, it is so very rare that you can find a true friend like you. that is a very special thing to own, keep it in your ehart forever and never let good. great poem!!!! im going to add you to my favorites, hope you dont mind. keep writing!
love you always,
april
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Thank You
Sweet P, this is well done! Also as sweet as you are, I consider myself your friend and feel honored by this write, great job, BRAVO!!! "
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Great poem porchi! I guess u have finally broken the shackles with this one.
When the world is doomed,
When there is light no more,
When all you have is pain,
Remember me
I will always be there for you
Great Job! Nice use of the refrain. -
Thanx..for the encouragement
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aww your friends are very lucky to have you as a friend!!
wow what a cool poem about friendship, probably the best one yet!
Maria -
i'm really sorry...i wasn't the first one to comment on this...n i got ya real angry...sorry porchi...forgive me(expectful smile)
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Moi????
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Porchi, This poem depicts all the qualitiies a good friend should possess... one can tell this is writen straight from heart... this is full of commitment... it's so nice to associate with you my friend... your words mean a lot ...
mina -
This is very sweet and well-written. The repetition strengthened it; it made me think of a Native American song or something. I recommend taking one of the exclamation points off. Keep up the good work, Porchi.
Love,
Moi -
Beautiful Poem . Your friend must be really pleased .I know I would be for someone to care about me like your poem expresses.
You know what it means to be a true friend very beautiful.Keep up the nice work!
Loretta -
YAY!!!I'm the first one to comment here and the first one to read it
Coming to the poem,this is soooooo straight from the heart and so full of love for your friends The imagery here is wodnerful.....like 'when the sky is clear'.Makes it a great read! What makes the poem so special is that you've promised to stand by your friends not only through good times but through bad ones as well and THIS is what true friendship is about! 
GREAT JOB!!! Happy writing
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