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the gurl who hid in the darkness

there sit a girl who didn't cared about the world
her heart was pure but hid through all black she wore
she put a wall a wall to protect her for what she was scared of the feeling for an other
she pretend she was Strong like she could only feel one emotion was sadness
the others she knew nothing of always feeling misplace
but she wanted only the feeling  to belong
she hid in the darkness she  was afraid what people thought so she sat alone
as her mind wasn't in reality but it actually gone
that's what she was use to living in the world by her self alone.

Author notes

this is about me what i really feel like misplace and i know people have felt that i hope ppl can related to this
Written September 1st, 2005

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