In a fairytale world all your dreams come true
Skies are filled with rainbows of multi colored hues
There are always smiles and laughter
No one ever sheds a tear in pain or sorrow
And there is always like today a happier tomorrow
In a fairytale world love comes in many ways
Lovers walk together by the oceans shore
No one to take away your hopes and dreams
Happiness is found in everything you see
Just like the love between a King and his Queen
In my fairytale world life is so serene
My emotions shine like that of a distant star
Showing the world how truly beautiful we are
Cascading thoughts of pure love is what I leave with you
In crystal blue skies and soft kisses like the fresh morning dew
~Lady Raven~
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Thanx to robert for the title, it's perfect.
Written August 31st, 2005
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Okay!
Now where shall we start? Your enchanted castle? I don't think I wanna leave! 
Can I stay forever?
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APPLAUSE!
Simply- ENCHANTING! Oh my I feel a muse talkin'...I LOVE FANTASY...and your work may have inspired one of my 7,689,435 muses!!! Fantastic story, I love these, they are amongst my favorite in all of poetry...let's face it- WHO WOULDN'T WANT to be in such a place of neverending JOY? NICE JOB!
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ahhhMum this piece is simplyBeautiful! Love the pic!
as alwaysI adore your works!
Amazing!
Angel
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Absolutely Goregous
My god that was beautiful! That was a wonderful poem and I wish I could go read more of your work..which I will do. I just found the rhyme wonderful and it was really beautiful. -
Lmao..forgot to applaud
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Wow, this is amazing, a lot of beautiful imagery..and I love the picture, wonderful job, and best of luck to you
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Interesting work here - it reads like a fantasy - strond imagery, great use of descriptive words. It is filled with happiness and love - nice.
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lovely
beautiful write sounds like a pefect place for the good at heart to enjoy a life of love and happiness an honestly beautiful heatfelt poem and the picture is food to (Wipes his eyes)
having a happy good day so the darkness is not that strong -
This poem is very sweey, and I like how you chose to use pink, like a cute fairy-tale color, over the blackness of the unknown from which you are attempting to get away. Just a couple notes on editing (sorry I'm an English major)... there should be commas in this sentence like this--> "And there is always, like today, a happier tomorrow" and also it should be "ocean's shore" rather than "oceans shore." other than that, it's cute! -
WOW!!!this is a beautiful....awesome....AMAZING poem!!! very well written and the picture is just breath taking it is so beautiful you did a very very good job on this poem
keep up the good work!
vampiry julianna -
Very very beautiful, love the pic as well.
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Come with me
Take my hand
I will show you
My fairytale land!
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Oooooh! I likes a lot! I just LOVE fairytales! Sigh! I like fairytale land. And yes, it is a happy place to be. Better than reality! It sucks big time! Tra-la-la-la! Off we go into fairytale land! Hand in hand with my coolest twin!
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Awww mum its so pretty! It goes exactly with the pic. Josephine Walls I think. But it was a beautiful poem, and it paints a beautiful picture! Love ya!
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Stupendous!!!!
Excellent thought and beautiful presentation!
Best wishes,
manoj -
This is so beautiful and very enchanting, your words are very vivodly and romanticaly intwined with the beating of your heart
calling me out of the shadows to deliver me upon your golden wings our dreams are our sanity and our freedom from this world -
Beautiful poem. I like the graphic you chose. Great write.
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