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Reality Dreams

As I look into your eyes, the daze you give I see the love you have for me, which is all I’ve known from you,
Your sleep takes you away somewhere far; to the happiest moments you wish to dream, where I find you and I to be,

In your dreams; they consist of only this,

Nights of love,
Underneath sparkling diamonds; in the midnight sky,

Sunrise to rise,
Your day has come; filled with painted morning gold,

Daylight hours; a beautiful fragrance from you -
Makes the heart melt within,

As our love is strong;
Forever and always; eternity and everlastingly,

Your love for him; a dream inside a dream; it may feel,
However reality speaks of truth, for the love you and I contribute to

Evening’s gentle wind; as God sends His blessing for His two,
Sundown sets; the couple stand, hand in hand - vows are to be said

“You’re my love, as we stand here today, I can only say;
You’re the only one meant for I. My love for you will stay strong - forever; for you’re my best friend.
As promised from years before; for you, I am a good person, and with the help of you, you make me that person.”

“I do” they say, love is forever shared; and as one they will stay.

Doves are then released; for the two – soul mates; for they have now found the true happiness they have always looked for inside each others hearts; and there their love will remain.

Author notes

Another write for my baby, it is a somewhat reply to what on my auther page; she wrote for me
Written August 31st, 2005

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  • holliebrown
    February 28, 2006
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    AWW

    Hey! You sent me this poem, and I love it. You are such a good writer. I wish that I could write like you. One good thing about having a boyfriend that can write poems is that he writes a lot about you and it makes you cry-but in a good way. I love when you write about me, it is sweet. You are a wonderful boyfriend. I love you. Have a good day.


  • teardrop gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Excellent piece! And I truly mean this. You have sharpened your skills I see. Keep writting my friend. This was awesome.

    TD


  • Forms of Me
    September 9, 2005
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    This is romantic Josh....you know..you are quite the lil writer. I am a proud AP momma to you ...that is for certain.
    I hope you are well...I have not see you online much.
    LIZ


  • LadyUnique silver member
    September 3, 2005
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    extremely romantic write though it's laid out in a rather distracting way... taking a bit away from your poem... but that is just my humble opinion each writer to his/her own