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On the Other Side

He showed me his soul with a kiss
He touched me gently
My heart got caught in all the bliss
We held each other intently
I kept getting lost in his eyes
I was told to keep our relationship in silence
We kissed and said our good-byes
Would my imaginary fight with his other end in violence
I can’t help but wonder
Do we love each other?
Oh my heart is in a blunder
Or does he love his other?
I feel like my heart is about to burst
It all comes down to either he’s going to hurt me or her

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Written August 31st, 2005

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  • falling through
    September 21, 2005
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    i like it darlin stop reading my comment shelby! you have to wait! anyways i like it!


  • bluidbabiegirl
    September 20, 2005
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    Missed you writing... Well this was beautiful and touching... Loved it Miss you...

  • jessieboo
    September 3, 2005
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    awww... this is good darlin!! i love ya so much
    Jessica

  • ImOnlyGunnaBeMe
    September 1, 2005
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    aww this is good babe! i love it! and you! lol
    x-0-x-0-x


  • DarlingStac
    August 31, 2005
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    Glad to see your writing again.
    This is soo good, i loved it.. i can relate to this.. Great Job...
    xoxo stac

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