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A Fish Tale

A FISH TALE 

 

There was a captain of a sailing ship
Loved sailing upon the deep blue sea
With shiny dark hair, eyes of brown
 Six feet tall and handsome as can be 

Known as the Romantic Buccaneer
Wearing silk shirts of orange and gold.
Stole coins from rich to help the poor
He was daring, handsome and bold

One day a pirate ship went sailing by
Full of treasure of diamonds and pearls
He looked through his long eyeglass
He saw the face of a pretty young girl

He knew he had seen the maiden before
His mind wondered where it could be
Then looked again through the eyeglass
The pirate's ship was sinking intothe sea

He sailed quickly over to the wreckage
The sea so quiet there wasn't a sound

His eyes searched for the young woman
Box of diamonds was only thing found

Picked up the box and sailed for home
The diamonds would go to help the poor
He kept thinking of the pretty young girl
 Could she have washed upon the shore

For a moment he heard a voice singing 

Something slashing all around in the sea
She was hanging on the side of the ship
Her large fish tail hanging into the sea

The woman, a mermaid from the island
 Pirates had captured her in their fish net
As he leaned over the side to kiss her
Splashing her tail, got him soaking wet

Now when he sails past that tropical isle
Mermaid's songs brings back memories 
That day long ago he fell in love with her

The mermaid from the deep blue sea

 

 

 

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Written August 31st, 2005

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  • Rovingone gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    A delightful tale. You have a pirate robin hood and his lady fair in the briny deep. What a perfect tale of love, about a man and his lady with a tail.

  • Linda Sue silver member
    September 2, 2005
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    This is so cute. You have such an imagination! As usual, the rhyming is great. Interesting choice of name for the handsome Buccaneer. You should look for a contest for this. It's a sure winner. Take care. Love, Linny

  • Mr Coffee
    September 2, 2005
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    That was worth two smiles . Cute poem, and it had a splashing end.


  • josh-13
    September 1, 2005
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    This poem was nice, so full of colorful imagery, an older poetic feel to it. I loved it. You did an awesome job mom. This piece was really good, and written well.