Fifth dimensional echoes
bounce beyond the cosmos
enveloped within the sound
of silence;
Whispered tones,
spoken to the rising sun in
a tired drone, once vibrant
in the orchestration of celestrial
magnificence;
Thunderous, majestic vibrations
touch each and every star in
the dying glow of aftermath;
Luminous, fragmented sighs
reach as in friendship towards
the orb of light and kiss away
the nightly concerto bringing
a standing ovation,
heard by all.........
Author notes
Written August 31st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- One Day: Music of the Moon by CarolDesjarlais.
400 points, ended September 1, 2005, 1 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you
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good job
just wonderful visions
good lick as well -
Many thanks Aby glad you enjoyed it
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You are very kind, thank you
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wow this is great!
i also loooooooooove the picture!!!
this is such a kool poem
and the dark bakround is awesome to!
i like this!
much luv,
aby -
this is so good. i hope u win the contest because really u deserve it for writing something this good
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Rob,..don't underestimate the power of "frogs"
Glad you enjoyed this, many thanks for your kindness
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You are most welcome!
-Darkness
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Not much left for me to say. lol. This was a very good read. I felt the magic and mystery of the moon were well expressed. I knew this contest would inspire some good writes, and this does not dissapoint. Best of luck with this gem.
Peace, Rob -
Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed it
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Good write. I really liked the last line, I thought it was well put and tied into the poem well. A very beautiful concept, the song the moon sings and the way you painted was done with simple understanding of something to vast. Well done.
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Thank you Vickie..The picture holds the magic I do so love these little breaths of inspiration
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I'll have to join your other fans in commending such a brilliantly penned write. This couldn't have been any
better than it was
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Thank you Reenie as always I have "borrowed" this wonderful picture ( I am a sucker for lovely art ) Hope the harp hearing is not a sign of something sinister lol just jesting
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a very magical write indeed. It is as if I could hear the harps as all else was very still...best wishes in this contest, and I loved the picture
xoxoxo
Reenie
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You are very kind Many thanks and good luck in the contest
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crystaldust 31-08-0522:17
Oh, brilliant poem, I love it! Doesn't leave much for the rest of us to say it is so full of imagination and cosmic sounds. Well done: it should reach the gold, I think. -
Many thanks
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8.5/10
very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it ! The flow is allright and I could 'feel' the magic around it.
The poem is original in every way.
Great job, keep writing !!
Greetzz
Allstar 420 -
The picture was "borrowed " from shewolfnative...the words...my own Glad you enjoyed
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I am sure you will manage beautifully
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Thank you
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I like the picture, very good poem. I like it alot! LOL
Keep in touch,
Blackstar16 -
excellent
trying to think and will try to make my 6th sense work..Linda
SEEMS like a lovely poetic jesture.I pray I can do this lol..
Linda.. -
Oh wow, excellent. The images this created in my eyes were amazing, plus it was just fun to read, and re-read. Now I have to read more of your work, very very good.
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Oh yes,very nice! Thank you for entering.
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