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It’s only you

The joyous,the adventurous
The romantic,the curious
The dreamer,the warrior
That sympathy and sharing
That constant laughter
That endless concern
It’s only you!

All those years of togetherness
Harmonious moments of love and cheers
The magical moments of laughter
Filled with your wit and humor
Those warm and treasured memories
Creating a special sense of happiness
Symbol of romance and music
Your love seed made my love go around you
My life has become richer
Because of you
My darling love
Its only you!

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Written August 31st, 2005

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  • marciakay81
    February 26, 2008

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    wow. this wonderful. i love the way you included the "ups and downs"...the joy and adventure-the sympathy and sharing...the laughter-the concern...and through it all...only you. beautiful!

  • Min07
    February 26, 2008
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    Simple and cute


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    March 15, 2006
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    I honestly love this write as much as I did the first time I read it. That is surprising since it has been a while since my previous comment. It is nice to run across poems that have a lasting like-ability to them. It is a simple a direct piece that is put together like melody.

    So glad you enterred and best of luck in the contest.

  • Musafir
    November 9, 2005
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    Feeling changes perception... dear.
    Thanks for liking.

  • rosebud
    November 9, 2005
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    are there any perfect ones in this world....but ones as described in here...? .... aside with the joke, it's very sweet piece... loved it!

  • Musafir
    November 7, 2005
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    Thanks for appreciation.
    Best wishes,

  • teen-poetess
    November 7, 2005
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    Wow, you're describing like the perfect person here... Excellent job~

  • Musafir
    November 2, 2005
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    Thanks madame for appreciation.

  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    November 2, 2005
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    Very nicely musical and happy poem. It is short and sweet, but it expresses great joy, love and happiness. I very much enjoyed reading it.

  • Musafir
    November 2, 2005
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    THANK YOU DEAR FOR APPRECIATION.
    Wishing you happy times,


  • luckynsincere
    November 2, 2005
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    this is beautiful... I really enjoyed. the ending was so powerful... PERFECT! thanks so much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck!
    Melanie

  • Musafir
    October 30, 2005
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    Thanks annie.
    Yes dear... you must be very lavable .. so lucky.
    Best wishes and good luck always!

  • annie
    October 29, 2005
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    Good work

    I lucky two in love. This is felt from your heart to the page, I like the feelings felt from reading your poem.Good poem

  • Musafir
    September 3, 2005
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    Thanks Frog for appreciation.
    Best wishes
    musafir

  • Musafir
    September 3, 2005
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    Thanks Tears for your beautiful words!
    Have nice time
    musafir


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 3, 2005
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    Everyone should have someone that inspires them to write like this. a wonderful poem. Good luck and best wishes! ~Frog~


  • Frozentearz
    September 3, 2005
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    It is so wonderful to have someone in
    our life's that can inspire us and
    make the world a little nicer
    and I agree with huntress wonderful
    words for a song
    Blessing
    Tears

  • Musafir
    September 1, 2005
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    Thank you
    I AM OVERWHELMED BY YOUR PRAISE.
    BEST WISHES


  • Huntress silver member
    August 31, 2005
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    This would make a great song. Fantastic

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