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For The Love Of Friendship

I see the glass of mine half empty
Whenever I can't feel your sweet love
So please, I beg, please love me
For you're all my heart ever dreams of

My love is yours,  forever true
As my hair blows threw whispering wind
I long the sensual touch of you
For I've always shared my heart within

Though miles seperate our bodies
Know inside, I love you my dear
Feel my heartbeat flowing tenderly
And whenever you're down, i'm here

Know my heart beats true for only you
And the love through the miles we send
My loving soul knows our friendships true
And this will never, ever end

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Thanks for reading us!
Tammy The Angel of The Sky
And Timothy The Poeticweaver
Written August 30th, 2005

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  • Whispering Winds
    January 30, 2008
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    You know what, i still feel the way i did the very day we wrote this... and we really need to write again soon... I miss you
    ~Me~

  • Whispering Winds
    May 5, 2006
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    Oh hun, how are you? How have you been? Have not heard from you in so long. Thanks for reading.
    Much love always,
    Tammy


  • hot babe30
    September 5, 2005
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    wow
    i love it!!!!
    great job!
    keep it up!
    much luv,
    aby


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 3, 2005
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    What a beautiful write. I never expect anything but love and beauty when the two of you write together. You always take my heart to a warm peaceful place with your collaborations. To feel a love and friendship like this has to be the most awesome feelinng. You guys are great together, thanks again for sharing yourselves and your hearts with us.

    Hope all is well with both of you. I love you both dearly and you're always in my thoughts and prayers. Be Well and Be Blessed


  • twinzy001
    September 1, 2005
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    you two are gems and rarities of heart and soul. A friendship like this can last a lifetime despite the previous commment! I love you both because you put smiles on my face when I need them to be there and for that I thank the both of you.. any way the two of you could write my wedding vows haha ? still asking haha
    Savina
    twinzy001


  • Black Raevyn
    August 31, 2005
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    This is great.I love it Friendship is the best thing you can have. Eventhough it may not last forever its still important.

  • StanArt-SX
    August 31, 2005
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    Very warming

    I was told "your not supposed to like sentimental stuff, are you a man or a big girl" I told them to go chew a brick I love sentimental and I love this poem.

  • Whispering Winds
    August 31, 2005
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    Timothy and I will forever have a friendship that is stronger than anyother I have ever had, or ever will. Having a frindship like this is so amazing...More amazing and any words could say. Thanks for reading us.

    Tammy


  • Touched by an Angel
    August 31, 2005
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    Amazing Job

    Awwww, this was very beautiful Tammy You have such a loving heart that shows right through this master piece!!! It actually sounds like a song when I was reading it Very Well Done Girl Keep up the Great Work! And your welcome you deserve having a light shine through your day I think everyone of your friends even wish that too! God Bless

    Sedusha
    **Keep smiling **

  • dancingpuppet
    August 31, 2005
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    This one touches really close to home, and i really enjoyed it. There is a sadness in not being near the ones you love and yet- being apart really seems to make your friendship grow.

  • Whispering Winds
    August 31, 2005
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    This means alot to me too my dear friends. And about this one turning out good...well i must say that all of ours turn out good. I love everything we write together. I love ya muchly my dear friend.

    Tammy


  • josh-13
    August 31, 2005
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    Awwwwwwwwww, wow, This poem made even me blush. I loved it, you did an amazing job on this one. This flowed perfect, and just had a special touch to it, where ya can feel the emotions in it. I loved it.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 30, 2005
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    Excellent!

    Thanks for being one of the best friends a weaver can have! LMBO! I appreciate you, and all the loving thoughts you send my way each day! Thanks hun, and this did turn out pretty good...sure meant alot to me...Thanks again my friend!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

  • fruitytootie31
    August 30, 2005
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    aww thats sad, but cute and sweet at the same time. good job with the emotion and stuff!

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