I wish I knew what to do,
I love you so much;
however I can't handle any more
Lies from you!!
You tell me one thing; but
I should be angered you tell my
pseudonym a totally different story.
What the hey am I to believe-- a lie??
Can I believe when you say that you love me?
The hell with your lies,
tell me the truth for once.
Now is your last chance
before our love eternally dies.
*STOP* feeding me your lines of lies.
I want the loves and the truths
you used to tell me
that set our hearts free,
Now is your last chance
before our love eternally dies.
I love you heart and soul.
And to think Marriage was our goal.
I wish I knew what to do,
I still hope to live my life-- *ME & YOU!!*
That can't happen if you Immediately don't
*STOP* feeding me your lines of lies.
Author notes
Option 2
My ex Love tells me on IM one set of information then tells me as my psuedonym that he also ends up talking to and not realizing it other info and both sets of info are not matching up with each other. complete sets of different lies.
Written August 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- love= Heartbreak by Hearts.That.Bleed.
375 points, ended July 1, 2007, 14 entries
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I love these lines.
I love you heart and soul.
And to think Marriage was our goal.
I wish I knew what to do,
I still hope to live my life-- *ME & YOU!!*
That can't happen if you Immediately don't
*STOP* feeding me your lines of lies.
I wish I could tell him this somehow...
Great write
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wow
great poem. the emotion in it was amazing. I know too what it's like to have someone lie to you constantly. Thank you for entering my contest and goodluck.
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wow you really put a lot of emotion into this piece. great job.
~shatteredremains -
i'm so sorry. here; here's another shoulder to cry on.
you're not alone girl.
we've all got it.
Edited on Jun 06, 6:48 p.m. because 'even the best make mistakes.'. -
Thanks for sharing, you surely express yourself well, I hope things get better for you, and realize life goes on, even when it doesn't go our ways...I have to deal with that every single day, so cheer up, and make it happen another way, you can do it, I have faith in your sweet soul!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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this is a really great poem i can feel your emotions very well great job and things will get better trust me
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