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naked interview the first three stanzas

accolade's to you Mr.so and so
you have finally  done me in
forced fed me this dirty cigarette
placed this lighter in my clumsy hand
forced the flick of a flame upon my finger
and made me breathe it all in.

thank you ms. bro ken promises,
ms.iron  heart insensitive.
i built these walls just to keep you in.
you have built up walls that never end.
and your grand escape was beau ti ful.
i never thought that i'd see you sink so low.


hours pass and i am still here,around.
i am hesitant to move as the rain beams down ,around me.
light flickers in and out through distant clouds.
those sounds are god clapping for you now.
get up bright eyed wondergirl get up and see me.
because i am still standing here and i am waiting.
i'll clap with clouds and rain falling down
on pavement outside this shadow of a doubt.





Author notes

i write prose-poetry so if there had to be an excuse id blame that.
Written August 30th, 2005

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