Shattered hearts and broken dreams
is what I do to myself.
I know many hearts and their endless schemes
Of destroying their self.
I make endless realms
where people is captured in.
And predict their night's Hell,
or their night's in Heaven.
This place I take them to
Is for those who let me take their life
I'll show them a dreary room,
and see their faces of strife.
Or maybe I'll take them to
a place of wonders and majestic features.
Where there's lots to do
And never ending pleasures.
A prince was I, Prince of stories I was,
and I told many of them.
No one knows where my secrets lies, because,
Secrets should remain far from them.
I have friends... a few, Enemies... some. Whack
And that's the way it should be.
I collect people and their names as they come,
For rules do not apply to me.
Although this was my elder self
I have a new part of me.
At this moment there's nothing to tell,
for it is a mystery.
Author notes
I described Dream, I hope I did well. I'm not sure what 'Endless' is, so I'm just giving a whack at it.
ENTER SANDMAN
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Written August 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- The Endless Contest by Starhiker.
300 points, ended September 7, 2005, 4 entries
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Excellent poem! Thought provoking and with nice insight.
Enjoyed reading.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
manoj -
this is a nice piece. since dream can send you to a heaven or a hell. Nice idea and nice way to put it. keep up the good work
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I loved this is was so powerful, and I really loved the end, with the end you put a stunning finish to this magicalm piece!!
Well done and good luck in the contest!!
Maria -
PS, ap's computer must be playing up applause did not go, so here it is again, hugs
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Hi, good write, might be better fourth line to read of destroying themselves, just a thought,all the best in the comp, you have my applause. hugs Di
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Great poem, Life in Death! Love your AP-nick! Don't worry about there not being any other poems to comment and applaud yet, check back later, and there will be more entries; take a pick, and edit your Author's Comment accordingly. You followed all the rules to the letter, as good as you could, considering you were number one. Great rhyming, and good flow. And imagine, you didn't know who the Endless were... You're an excellent poet!
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A note to readers: My computer was acting up as I typed this. Something happened so I can't put any fancy backround to this poem. And thanks for reading.
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