This poem was laid out by Mark Rickerby using a comment I left him on a poem of his. Read his poem to understand:
*Too Full* allpoetry.com/Poem/385505
It takes me to a world of innocence;
to a place I long to be once more.
A place I wish someone would run away to with me.
Take me from the painstaking responsibilities of life.
Let me run half naked through the sand,
let me splash the water all over,
let me jump on the bed naked,
and let me lie in the arms of a lover all morning.
I want to be the one eating breakfast
and blowing bubbles in my chocolate milk to stir it up.
Where the ocean meets the horizon
and the sun lingers in the sky.
Where there are no lights
so every star is visible in the night
and the warm showers come every now and again.
Author notes
I just like the way he laid this out for me..and it describes my more fun/romantic side..sooo I thought I'd post it 
Written August 30th, 2005
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Beautifully done. After reading this I think I will be less strict on my daughter about blowing bubbles in her milk.
Excellent images.
John -
Wow, this was beautifly written, and an amazing poem, I loved it. An amazing job done on this poem
It had lush beautiful imagery and it was just simply amazing,
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Yay! Here it is in all it's glory.
Every once in a while, a response to one of my poems is a poem in itself. This was one of those occasions. I hope every line of this comes true for you.
xoxo
Mark
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