Falling mist
The ground gently kissed
With beads of nature's tears
Shimmering in the sun as a rainbow appears
The red summer sun will be setting as dusk nears
Asleep, another night passes through
Sunrise shimmers anew
Morning dew
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Written August 30th, 2005
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excellent
This is lovely. It is so soft and gentle. The imagery is so
outstanding. Darlee77 -
WONDERFUL POEM
Thank you for the wonderful comment Anu. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. I hope all is well with you . Take care my friend. Sandy
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Hey sandy, I loved the pic, the rainbow, the poetry and the words its written with.I love nature, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem beautiful lady.. take Care.. Anu
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This is very flowery writing. Not my cup of tea. But it has its own overbearing beauty.
Arielle Giselle -
As far as I know, and have always practised, octa-tri (or trois-par-huit) are supposed to use the last line as the title. Regardless of that, this was very beautiful indeed, very very beautiful. I love the image of the red summer sun, hehe.
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This was so gorgeous. Oh my goodness. This is a trois-par-huit, isn't it? It's great. Amazing job.
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dear mum... this is so sweet and beautiful..
as u know I love nature... this has touched my soul deeply...
thanks for sharing mum!!!
lots of luv
Neha
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ha i am the first to comment. great job mommy. i liked it
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