Its life now, Then sudden death.
Its death now, Amidst holy faith.
Its faith now, Without any imagination.
Imagination hides, Behind my evolution !!!
Vichitra Joshi (J.Vic)
Author notes
Ok I Didnt make it for any contest ( had to be honest to you laurianne 
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well.. remember Ahum Brahmasmi by me? ... its same here... here I is the reader, whoever reads it.
We learn we evolve, we grow we evolve, we think we evolve, we live we evolve. (kindly leave ur scientific mind behind in this case of Evolution 
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i just mean to say that nothing.. death .. religion bans.. or anyones thinking can stop me from evolving to my own self.
got it?? ( yes.. say yes please )
hugs and kisses
take cares
Miss Me
- vic
Written August 30th, 2005
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evolution calls for revolution & possibly revelation
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Yes, I agree with you Vic...
We have evolved a lot... one time our ancesters were apes now we are human... there's no contribution of science in the evolution.... evolution is a natural process... and faith is not to be questioned either... my friend you've said so much in a few lines... keep it up...I'm sorry for not redaing your work lately but I can assure you I'll catch up with it soon...
mina
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i happen to be browsing and I happen to stop by your page I really like the way you done your page Way to go and Keep up the wonderful work that you have done here and i liked this poem that you have done here
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Lovely poem. This is an awesome write.
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Very cool poem Vic...Who's sleeve did you climb up to find that one?? haha! Cheers,
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cool and different
its verrry small and cool my dear friend.. its cooooooool for a foooooool:-P
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Well you have got a scientific mind and I enjoyed reading this I may not agree with you, but everyone is entitled to their own beliefs and feelings. What I really liked I found this interesting and really liked the picture and how you told the story behind it. Very good work my friend.
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Excellent
lol, Vic... twisted like a circle 
this is awesome, how do you come up with these beautiful visions? Oh... you're a beautiful vision yourself sweety... I got choco for you to
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I still dont get it
... or atleast I'm on the way to getting it.... but liked it nevertheless 
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Hey Vic, I am here looking at your poems, this one is great my little Chickadee I hope you do well in this Contest.
Lovesya Jenni
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hahah ... well... thats may be cos you love your self too much.. or ahem.. others love your self too much?? - vic to sarah ( diwata )
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sooooo inspiring
Wow...This is short but really nice...because it appears to be a little mystified...Forgetting the scientific evolution makes it all the more interesting with every word.
I must say I agree...
Even if the universe conspired I'd still choose to be me.
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I like it, very uhh... uhh... Okay I'm tongue tied! or sumthing...
Buut I liked it! It's very good.. and I think I got it.. I'm not really sure yet but... I'm getting there!
Jeg elsker dig vic!
Yay! yay! vic is back!
Keep writing, pleeeeeeeeeeease??!! *does pleading puppy eyes*
Hate me never, Love me forever.
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hi vic.. i did like it its gr8! u r a nice person!! good write bye bye
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nice..Change is the only constant thing in the world..and good luck at the contest!!!
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brill!
haha lol nice poem vic i like it! hmmmm....to think of it....ur gettin beta writin shorter poems, less words yet u still give so much meaning to it!
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wow vic... this is great... you always seem to say more in less words... everytime i mean..
very nice piece of poetry.. so much to gain from it!!!
Neha -
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... ... who is vic?? 
.. my name is Brandi
- vic to nikki..aka.. His nikki.. haha
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hmmm... simple, creative, amazing! I like it... You show the cycle within your words ah... MY VIC is so talented! keep it up!
LuV and LoLLiPoPz
Nikki
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HeLlO! "imagination hides behind my evolution"...there is something profound in your words, I really liked this. The idea of the events happening "now" is cool- it showa our lack of control and inability to know and plan the way things will play out for us, and when.
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You are evolving into a great poet Vic one with the ideas that force the rest of us to evolve and think harder about what we're doing!
You are right, we all evolve differently and into unique people... and no two evolutions will even be exactly the same.
hmmm...with cloning... even DNA can't be so unique!
Great write lil' brother
Best wishes and s... ~genie~
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no mary no kiki.. only Mish Cool Kiki
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I got it! thats weird cause i usually dont get it
♥Mary Jane? or Kiki?
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awesome
I got ya hunny, you're right though through time and experiences we all evolve, really wonderful poem with a beautiful message, good flow, your short lines emphasize your meaning, Ruth
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i had to.. cos you ish a blonde .. bad bad
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Well son, you've produced yet another amazing write. So much said in so few lines. I understand it without reference to the explanation but I think it's also very considerate of you to offer it to those less knowing. It's an amazing picture too, I'm guessing your the little gremlin right? Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Mums x x
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i like this poem and your right boys are jurks ill tell what happend between me and my ex now!!
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