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When I Hurt Someone and Seem to be in their eyes Bad

Into a dark and lonely cave I go
I have wronged my world
And so I leave
Into myself
I hide
Alone

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Written August 30th, 2005

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  • Maureen silver member
    August 31, 2005
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    I hope you don't hide very long. We all feel that we should retreat from the world sometimes and we all need to be forgiven at times. God forgives so why can't we? (It's especially important to forgive ourselves!)

    Maureen


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 30, 2005
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    excellent~

    Quite the power punched poem in this short one
    How can one have wronged the whole world???
    Stellar poem here and I have up a new one too
    Do come see me
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Glu
    August 30, 2005
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    i really enjoyed your format. and once again i totally relate.