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POOKIEBUBU (Rhyming Acrostic)

POOKIEBUBU


Poetry so wonderful, she does share

Opening page, it's her soul she does bare

Opulent the words that she does impart

Kindness and warmth, coming straight from her heart

It was she as a greeter, of AP

Everlasting joy she bestowed on me

Beginning one day, July of this year

Utilizing my pen, still with some fear

But to my surprise, her words I did see

Utmost was the praise that she gave to me


     


Deborah, A million thanks I give to you, for being there.
Making me feel welcome, my first AP friend.

Author notes

You can read Pookiebubu's great poetry at allpoetry.com/Poets/Pookiebubu

I commented on Funky Foal by Faithful Dreamer as well as applauded a wonderful write.
I also commented on your poem to OGreatBaldOne an acrostic birthday wish to him. Applauded another fine work.

Deborah,
These special thanks I give to you. Not just a poet, you are so much more. I am proud to call you a friend. Thank you for making me feel so comfortable about my decision to try my hand at poetry.  For anyone that may not know her by this name pookiebubu was formerly e e hal one of the wonderful greeters here at AP.


P.S.  I thought you might like the wolves there...LOL
Written August 30th, 2005

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  • sunny day
    September 27, 2005
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    Marianne, The subject of the poem is a wolf lover also, thus I chose the background. Glad to know you like them also. Hint, hint...LOL I'm glad you enjoyed this and I really enjoyed your poem for OGreatBaldOne. Thanks for the best wishes and the great comment. Sunniest of days to you. F: Joyce


  • stormigrl
    September 27, 2005
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    This was great and hey who told ya I like wolves? Man, now I'm gonna have to find that poet who squeeled!! (Just kidding)
    But I do like wolves, tigers and hawks (yeah in that order).
    This was a great poetic one. wow. You just reminded me that I wrote an acrostic for Ogreatbaldone. (lol). Even I get forgetful!
    Thanks for entering and good luck.
    Marianne.

  • sunny day
    September 27, 2005
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    Deborah, I will say again, these words you deserve and so much more. Your kind and warm heart show through in your works and your words for others. Thank you again for all you did to inspire me in writing. You will never know how much it means to me. Love and blessings, Joyce


  • Pookiebubu
    September 27, 2005
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    Again, you are so sweet. Thank you for the accolades!

  • sunny day
    September 15, 2005
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    grannyeri, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It is nice to give tribute to someone like e e hal aka. pookiebubu now. She made me feel so at home and that was the beginning.
    I'm glad you enjoyed the read and wishing you the sunniest of days. Joyce


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Nice to pay tribute to a special AP friend. Sure makaes a difference being welcomed liked that. Liked the poem, easy to read and loved the rhyme.

  • sunny day
    September 11, 2005
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    Jennifer, Thank you so much for the applause and the wonderful comment. I am flattered that you want to do one for me. It is very touching and all I can say when people do this is Wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Thank you again my friend. Keep writing, you are very talented and so warm hearted.
    Joyce


  • crazymomma
    September 10, 2005
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    You are so great at this. I am working on one for you but it is a very slow process for me because it is new to me

  • sunny day
    September 7, 2005
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    Maria, I'm sorry my magic didn't work its way that far yesterday...LOL I remember days of riding my bicycle in the rain too. Never a dull moment. Wow, you just made me very happy with your words. Your new fave! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!! Joyce


  • Ray Von
    September 7, 2005
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    well today it is very sunny but yesterday you didnīt use your magical powers to make andorra sunny, but you made me happy inside, I cycled in the rain! Thanx, and you are my new fave.
    Maria

  • sunny day
    September 7, 2005
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    Maria, Once again I thank you for your applause and such a very lovely comment. Deborah did make me feel so welcome and inspiration from people such as herself and you keep me writing. I'm glad you enjoyed my work and as long as I can make people happy I will continue to write. Off to the galaxies to read and reply. Have the sunniest of days!
    Joyce

  • Ray Von
    September 7, 2005
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    This was so lovely, and she loved it! I am glad that she made you feel welcome here and helped you settle, I enjoyed reading this acrostic a lot. It isa bit different than the other ones.
    Well done
    Maria

  • sunny day
    August 30, 2005
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    spam, Hope the boss doesn't catch you...LOL Thank you for taking the time to stop and read my work as well as making a wonderful comment on it. It is greatly appreciated. Have fun and don't work too hard. Joyce

  • sunny day
    August 30, 2005
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    grannyeri, Thank you for the wonderful comment it is greatly appreciated. I really like the acrostics, they have been so much fun to do. And, when it is done for someone it will come out easier. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks again. Joyce


  • spamwitch
    August 30, 2005
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    Great job and being at work now and kinda playing hookie to read all these poems glad someone sparked your interest as it is obvious that you can write, keep it up.

  • grannyeri gold member
    August 30, 2005
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    Very nice tribute to this AP friend. Acrostics are not that easy to create, yet you have created a wonderful one here. Keep writing.

  • sunny day
    August 30, 2005
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    I'll pass you the kleenex box...LOL I didn't use them all yesterday...hehe Thank you for the applause and the lovely comment. It is very enjoying, but never call it a job.
    It is a form of relaxation that allows us to let out the stress of our daily activities in this busy world.
    Joyce


  • Pookiebubu
    August 30, 2005
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    Awwwww.... now, it's my turn to cry. It's poets such as yourself which makes my job so enjoyable!

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