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Make Me Want You


We were what I wanted
So don't let this get old
Despite what you say
It's starting to fade
You need to find a way

To keep me guessing
Make me wonder
Take my breath away
You have to make me
Want to stay

Suffocate me
So I can push you aside
The ordinary's not enough
Surprise me with
Unexpected thought

Look deep into my soul
Don't take my heart for granted
You can't understand me
So just acknowledge
My complexity

Keep me guessing
Make me wonder
Take my breath away
You have to make me
Want to stay

We were what I wanted
What I was looking for
Just as I begin to doubt
Wait one more moment...
There's more

Make me
    Make me
         You make me want to stay

Author notes

wrote this a while ago as well
Written August 30th, 2005

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  • Mick Lane
    September 3, 2005
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    it all comes together now...