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Ceci n'est pas une poeme

This
is not
a poem
It is not
about
Anything and
has
no reg
ular
form at
all
please do
not read
it
I
thank
you

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  • ecrivain01
    July 22, 2008

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    Well, I like the title ...

    and since this isn't a poem, I don't feel qualified to comment on it.

    There seems to be a lot of this going around. I've seen several pieces posted here with that title.

    Anyway, good luck with writing poems in the future.

  • Vera Rich gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Mais c'est tres interessant!

  • Vera Rich gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Again, please empty your "Author's note" box! We are supposed to be celebrating France - not the other side of the Rhine.


    • Keith
      July 17, 2008
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      Got rid of the kitten at the same time. Nothing like killing two bird wi' one stone!


  • der atlas
    August 30, 2005
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    I like this, it is clever and well formatted. Good work and good luck!


  • silica silver member
    August 30, 2005
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    Yeah, okay I admit it¡! Lisa and I agreed that when there was no other recourse we would add a comment like – ‘…but beautifully displayed!’ or ‘Eloquent background!’

  • Keith
    August 30, 2005
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    You've got to admit, the kitten gives it style.


  • Keith
    August 30, 2005
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    Was grinsest du mir, hoher Schädel, her?
    Als dass dein Hirn, wie meines einst verwirrt,
    den leichten Tag gesucht und in der Dämmerung schwer,
    Mit Lust nach Wahrheit, jämmerlich geirret.


  • MargaretG
    August 30, 2005
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    Dear Keith, I apologize, and suggest a change. If you had put "please do not read it" at the top, I might not have, but as it is, I read it all. On the other hand, I always read things that say "please do not read it". A conundrum.

  • silica silver member
    August 30, 2005
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    Wet Paint









    Do not touch…¿?


  • Edna Sweetlove
    August 30, 2005
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    A wee bit ueber-cryptic, ceci. My condolences for your huge burden, could others share it, veilleicht, liebchen?

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