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Baby, I Miss You

Tears streaming down my face
Thinking of what we could have been
Not knowing if I will ever have that chance again

Some people say they don’t like you
Because of some mistakes you’ve made
But I see right thorough that
On the inside you are kind-hearted person

I’m sorry I made you wait
And maybe still making you

But I couldn’t make that choice at the time
It just wasn’t right
For neither me or you

But I miss
Seeing your smiling face
Those long nights talking on the phone
And most of all hearing you say I love you

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Written August 29th, 2005

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  • Carpe Noctem
    August 31, 2005
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    great

    Very nice and well-written. Good job.


  • DarlingStac
    August 30, 2005
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    aww.. this is good hunny... i can relate oh so well.. i hope you end up getting him back you deserve it...
    xoxo stac


  • August 30, 2005
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    Beautiful! I've been through a similar situation to this one, so I can relate a lot. Even though you're missing someone, the moments you had together must've been very special, and if you never forget those, things will eventually turn out okay. I loved this, and I think you did an amazing job. Well done.


  • BehindTheseEyes
    August 29, 2005
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    The decisions we make in life can affect us greatly. But we must learn from what we have done and if the oppertunity comes again hopefully you will have learned and take the better path that time.