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PAMELA A LAMPPA (Rhyming Acrostic)

PAMELA A LAMPPA


Pristine is this poet so fair

Adorned with words beyond compare

Melodious thoughts fill her head

Elaborate her works I have read

Loving heart so warm and tender

Adroit pen, her hand does render


Accolades she gives, one and all


Leaves a comment that does enthrall

Amazed, the reader stands to cheer

Maestro the word, she now will hear

Pam, these words I write you today

Plausive my words, hope to display

Alas, finished, what else can I say!!!



       


Pam, Thank you for all the praise and encouragement you give to me.

Author notes

My thoughts and feelings for a fellow poet and author that I was lucky to meet here at AP. You can read her beautiful work at allpoetry.com/ Poets/Pamela%2 0A%20Lamppa

I commented on FunkyFoal by Faithful Dreamer and applauded it as well, great poem.
I also commented on your birthday poem for OGreatBaldOne, what a wonderful birthday wish. Applauded a fine work as well.

Written August 29th, 2005

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  • sunny day
    September 3, 2006
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    dee, I saw your acrostic for Tabitha and I will get to the others. Thank you very much for the applause and your lovely words for this one I did for Pam who is one of the most fantastic authors on this site in my eyes. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always.
    Joyce

  • Mother Angst
    September 2, 2006
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    great

    i love this type of poem, and you have wrote this one quite well! i really enjoyed it.
    ive wrote some poems like this, too, and id be honored if you would give me your opinion of them. they are named for my kids, holly, david, and tabitha. let me know what you think of them!
    again, this is a great poem.

  • sunny day
    September 27, 2005
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    Marianne, The subject of the poem really helped it to flow.
    She is a maestro as I stated on the M line in Lamppa. Thank you for the comment and best wishes, also the reply to my question on the IM. Take care and sunniest of days to you.
    Joyce


  • stormigrl
    September 27, 2005
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    WOW!!!!! This was neat, I liked the way it flows. Nice very nice *clap* (oh I can't clap on this this)
    LOL.
    Marianne. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • sunny day
    September 27, 2005
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    Pam, You live up to it daily. I'm so happy you like the edited version and I hope to see an entry in this contest from you.
    You always warm my heart with your words of praise and the poetic masterpieces that you display here at AP. Thank you my friend. Joyce


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 27, 2005
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    Alas, I am truly humbled

    I LOVE this one, now if I can ONLY live up to this. You have truly warmed my heart. Thank you Joyce. Thank you. ~Pam

  • sunny day
    September 9, 2005
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    momma, She is a maestro and she has been so good to me. I have learned new forms of poetry from her, this included and I love the acrostics after having read some of hers. Thank you again for your words , you really have me smiling after wiping away the tears from the comment on Molly. Lots of love! Joyce


  • crazymomma
    September 9, 2005
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    I think that acrostics are hard enough without the rhyming scheme too. But your is so great like written with ease. This is such a lovely tribute.

  • sunny day
    September 9, 2005
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    Maria, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely compliment. You should take a look at Pam's work on here.
    She has been very inspirational to me. And now I have more inspiration in you. Be well my young friend and fellow starhiker. Joyce


  • Ray Von
    September 9, 2005
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    well, yeah i havenīt ever heard of Pamela A Lamppa but I am sure that you words of beauty on this page show how kind she is to you and how she actually is. Well done I think that this is a marvelous piece!!!!!!

  • sunny day
    August 31, 2005
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    Pam, I spoke what I felt. It is how you have made me feel, not only from the words of praise you give to me but the words I see in all of your works. It is I who say THANK YOU, for everything. You always give me inspiration and for that I could never say it enough times, thank you thank you thank you!
    You are a maestro!!! Joyce

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 31, 2005
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    SMILING SMILING SMILING

    I am truly moved to tears to read such a grand acrostic. How can I say THANK YOU. I am "speechless".
    What wonderful things you have said. My goodness. I am truly touched to the core! ♥ ♥ ♥


    ~Pam

  • sunny day
    August 30, 2005
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    Jim, Thank you for the wonderful comment. Your praise is greatly appreciated. I do try to write how I feel in my poetry.
    You're very welcome also...LOL Take care my friend.
    Joyce


  • Starhiker
    August 30, 2005
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    Nice acrostic, Joyce. I'm sure Pamela A Lamppa will love it. Her acrostic palindrome to you was great too. You have a nack for writing acrostic poems, and you honor anyone you write one as tribute. Thanks for mine.

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    surfer, Hope you caught a wave riding through this one. Thank you for the applause and the comment, it was very worthwhile. To give praise is even better than receiving it.
    I appreciate your words very much. Joyce

  • soccerchica77
    August 29, 2005
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    soooooo rad!!! :D

    wow this is a great tribute. i only wish i was more able to leave a worthwile comment, but as i'm dead and about to go to bed i'm afraid this comment won't mean all that much to you. but i'll go ahead and say that i think that the words used here are beautiful. whoever this person is should count themselves blessed to be described by such an able mind as yours. keep writing!!!

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    Kelly, Thank you so much for the lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to her. Take care and peace be with you also. Joyce

  • blueeyestexas
    August 29, 2005
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    Yeah!!! I love Pam!!! This is a wonderful tribute! So well done!

    Peace, Kelly

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    Hello song, Thank you for the applause and the wonderful comment you have made. I'm glad you enjoyed the read and she is a very sweet person. An amazing poet too. Joyce


  • heismysong
    August 29, 2005
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    Hello- I recognized Pamela's username from a contest (or something) awhile back. I really enjoyed your acrostic about her! Nice rhyme to it, and thoughtful, too! Sweet!

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    Vickie the reasoning behind the * is I want the letter to stand out and I can't bold things as I am not a silver member.
    I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the comment.
    Joyce

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    Lynette, Thank you for the applause and the wonderful comment.
    She truly is remarkable and such a great person. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Joyce

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    grannyeri, It does take a while some times. Other times it just hits you like a ton of bricks. I love doing these and usually can think of something rather quickly but this took me a while as I wanted to show her the respect she has shown me.
    I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the comment.
    Joyce


  • August 29, 2005
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    I have to agree she is this wonderful!!!! A fabulous tribute to a wonderful poet, friend and encourager... gorgeous poem.
    ~Lynnette


  • Vickie J
    August 29, 2005
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    It's a very nice tribute to your friend. You obviously appreciate all that she has done for you and this honors her nicely.
    If you wanted a suggestion, I would think the acrostic would look better without the *before and after the first letter. Just personal tastes perference, cuz others may think it's better to keep it the way you have it.

  • sunny day
    August 29, 2005
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    Tears, Pam has told me to look at your work, being a fellow bay stater. You are on my favorite list as well. Thank you for the applause and your wonderful comment about her. I am glad you enjoyed reading my words of praise to her. Joyce


  • Frozentearz
    August 29, 2005
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    Pam has always been one of my top notch fav readers
    her abilities always amaze me each and every time I
    Visit her page. Truly her talent is a gift from above
    And this writer is so glad to have her enrich my life.
    well done
    FrozenTears


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 29, 2005
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    A nice acrostic compliment to Pam. Very well thought out and conveyd to the reader. It takes a while to think out the rest of the sentence for each of these letters. Well done.

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