Why do I feel like
you're just walking away
from this love that we've shared
up until this day....
Why do I lie in bed at night
crying over stupid little fights?
What did I do wrong?
Can't we just go back?
Back to this love;
this love we once had.
It makes me feel like I'm the
one who made it all bad.
Why do I cry alone in my sleep...
hoping and praying forever
that you'll be there in times
that I feel so unwanted and weak?
Why must I try so hard to prove
my love for you,
When the only thing you want
is something from me that I do not have?
What did I do
for you to hurt me so bad?
I'm tired of crying...
crying alone in the dark....
Come rescue my soul...
Where is that first spark?
Author notes
Written August 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- For The Broken Hearted by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended September 10, 2005, 52 entries
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Comments
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awww..this was really good and i could feel all the emotion in it. great job and keep on writing because your so talented.
*Bella* -
This is a really good poem. It is a sad and meaningful one at that. I have felt this way many times and I know how it feels to be unwanted...*Sigh* Good job and keep up the good work.
Amber
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Thank you....but these are my true feelings...I have been with this man for almost 3 weeks now, and we're having some problems...I love him but I just have no idea how much more I can deal with....I appreciate your comment
Alecia -
this is beautiful! i have tryed countless times to express these very thoughts and havent been able to do it... great job!! hope things get better in ur situation, if this poem is non-fictional in ur life. great write! keep it up!!
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