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Lost Love

My Love for you is still there
Like a fire burning in my soul

You know of my deep passion
Yet you have your own love

Me waiting for my turn
So i can be happy for once

If you won't have me then who will
I seem to be destined to be alone

Yet i get slight hope of something good
Then again I'm struck down

The minutes pass in agony
My heart seems to cry

Tears of Crimson flow
My heart has been broken

Only one can mend it
Or it shall remain as is

Possibly after time has passed
A great soul will be able to mend my heart

Until then Its just lost love

Pouring from my deep wounds. . . .

Author notes

I found out some stuff...im not SAD sad...but im not happy...ill get over it...tho its not bad for inspiration!
Written August 29th, 2005

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  • ShadowedxIllusions
    November 21, 2005
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    this poem is what i've been looking for lately.. it seems to put in words what i could not, except a bit more beautifully.. I love this..

  • alonewithoutyou
    August 29, 2005
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    wow wow wow. love this. i know how you feel believe me i do... its f**kin rough. ive been dating others, i even got married, but i still always think of this one guy as the only one i need. its weird. loved the write... great emotion... flows beautifully