Precipitation
Is from heaven's broken heart.
The tears of sadness.
Author notes
I have never written a Haiku. It's my first, so I hope I did it correctly. When I see rain, it always reminds me of tears. Have you notice it always rain every moment of time in this world? Maybe not at the same area, but somewhere in the world, at anytime in life, part of the world is raining.
Written August 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- Do you Haiku ?? by skinwalker 2.
1000 points, ended September 10, 2005, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks. I am very glad you liked it.
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Lovely
I am trying to do this kind of poetry too and I find it a simple form of torture for me. I love the ease you have shown ,even if it was not easy -
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Now this is good. Love this brief, picturesque description of rain. Lovely stuff
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wow
, thats great Life in Death, i like it a lot, nice one, i wish you the very best of luck in the contest, i hope you get something good and worthwhile. cool poem once again
best wishes
traz
-Crazy-Poet-4-Eva- (soon to be Shimmering River)
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This was lovely. You have done a great job with this
best of luck in the contest
Mia
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very stunning indeed
You have written a very fine haiku in my opinion and yes I also think that somewhere in the world "heaven's broken heart" is crying.Bows and thank you . good luck in the contest ~Skinwalker
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