my kryptonite may weaken my fight
but she makes my light burn bright
sometimes i cant handle
the girl with the candle
her red hot fire
my hearts passionate desire
shes a real live wire
i know I'm just preaching to the choir
but this girls flame is so much more than just a liter
shes got something inside her
just looking into her eyes i become stunned
like i got bit from a spider
my beautiful treasure i will love forever
shes like a spark of nitrous
spreading quick like a virus
she cripples my speech
my mind is impeached
my system been breached
if only this method of attack could be teached
i call it my kryptonite
on me she has got a strong hold
or so i am told
anymore i really don't know
I'm lousing consciousness
yes fading fast
my time has past
snuffed out like a candle light
by she
my kryptonite
Author notes
hmmmm... i dont know how i feel about this one i guess its ok ive written better or have i you tell me
Written August 26th, 2005
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OMG!!! i gotta give ya props Shoulders!! you're stuff is...well i dunno... there isn't a word for it yay!! -
wow what an awsome story i like it alot keep up the great work
seems like everyone else likes it to well g2g love the title it reninds me of superman my fav actor well don't stop the awsome writting
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Total awesomness, DUH!
HEY! It's me again
This one was wicked awesome, duh. I have noiced you right about "she" and "her" alot. Your "nameless love" I assume, lol. Well this is a really cool poem, gosh, you need to stop writing for a bit and let me catch up,
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wow that was good i loved it!!!!!!
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i like it, i think you have written a little better, but not much, that just means they all rock sox!! haha. i do like it, i bet if you knew the truth you would write completely different things though...
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