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I'll wait for you

you love me
and i know its true
i love you just as much as you do
i know its a pain
its gonna be hard
its gonna be a challenge
for me as well as you


i finally found you
the man of my dreams
you are  the one i know
this is not just a silly game

ive only waited 16 years
it wouldnt hurt to wait one more

you bring me flowers
just because
and call me beautifull
when im nto beautiful at all

i love you i love you
with all of my heart
and i can wait forever
if it means our first time
will be remebered and special
you love me
i know its true
thats why im waiting
im waiting for you

Author notes

for my boyfriend david who i love and adore
Written August 29th, 2005

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  • kimbles
    August 29, 2005
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    great poem, i really felt the emotion in this poem.