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Deseando lo que tú no puede tener


Deseo de esperanza
Deseo de energía y de frescura
Deseo de la juventud
Deseo de tú

Deseo de control
El necesitar ser necesitado
Deseo de un propósito
Quisieran que el nadie más le tuviera

Deseo de la protección
del reaseguro y del perdón
Una distracción
Quisieran que tú me deseara

Deseo de la libertad
trampa
Deseo de unión
confinamiento
Deseo de cualquier persona
Tú
Deseo alguien
Tú

Deseo no desear
lo que no puedo tener
Tú

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Written August 29th, 2005

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 11, 2005
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    okay... off to find a translation site.. lololol

    my spanish is crap.. lolololol
    french is reasonable.. and lil' diddy bit of italian..

    anyways.. how's life in Spain hun??? going well I hope


  • live-death
    August 29, 2005
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    i love this part:
    "Deseo no desear
    lo que no puedo tener
    Tú".
    I mean, even me that im latin couldnt it write it better than you!
    excellent!


  • HaleyMary
    August 29, 2005
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    Good job on this. I like to see poems and other writings besides my own in spanish. Good write.