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Dew drops in the vale
Footprints by furred creatures
Bathed in the sunlight
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Untimely sunshine
Petal hands begin to part
Subtle rose is born
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Swift hand in the breeze
Ripples a thirst of summer
Against river banks
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White crashes on rocks
Amidst the twilight hours
Trickle into night
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The bleached confetti
Fluttered on by the winds hand
Settling on hills
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Written August 2005
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thanks a lot
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A very lovely portrait of nature. Good job!
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it paints such a lovely picture.very vivid.i can see the footprints.i can even see the furry creature scurry away.very nice.my best to you in the contest.
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this was very picturesque ..good luck
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great haiku SilverScent, its very good, i hope ya get something good and worthwhile
nice one, i wish you the very best of luck
traz
-Crazy-Poet-4-Eva- (soon to be Shimmering River)
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this makes me think of the start of spring sigh Lovely haiku
Best of luck in the contest
Mia
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This is wonderful, but I think you meant "dew drops", dear. Best wishes to you on the contest.
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Another splendid portrait of nature ~Thank you and best of luck in the contest ~Skinwalker
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