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A Love Like Mine

I care for you in ways
I never thought I would.
Thoughts of you won’t stop.
Even though they probably should.
I cannot deny
the feelings within my heart.
They’re locked within the chambers.
Never to depart.
Yet still some questions plague my mind
and come from deep within.
You appear to be happy,
but are you satisfied with him?
I know he loves with all his heart
just like you always say.
But does he love you tenderly
in that special way?
Does his heart long to hear your voice,
or see the light cascading off your face?
Does he hold you tightly when you’re sad,
the way my body does embrace?
Does he know just what to say,
or when to say nothing at all?
Every moment spent with you
can he instantly recall?
Does he love the color of your eyes
as they pierce into his soul?
Do kind words pour from him
like a fountain uncontrolled?
I just hope he realizes and understands
how lucky a man he must be.
To be able to have and hold
someone as beautiful as thee.
These things I do
I’m sure he may do too.
But I really hope he loves you
in the ways in which I do.

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Written August 29th, 2005

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  • HereComesTheSun
    May 18, 2008

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    omgsh this poem makes me just like awww it is so well written i LOVE it it also makes me feel better its not always the girly pinning after someone great job


  • Baisi
    May 18, 2008
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    That was SOOOOO good!I know exactly how that feels, except, its a guy I love, instead of a girl.