'RASPBERRY'
Reading and writing furiously
Adding comment after comment
She brings joy to poets one and all
Penning her works with loving care
Brilliant are her words that always flow
Everlasting joy they do bestow
Resplendent the images she creates
Rewarding each and every reader
Your heart is as golden as the jubilee!
Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)
August 29, 2005
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Raspberry, You always fill your page with such beauty and I thought this was a good way to let you know that.
Picture courtesy of:
www.freefoto.com/preview.jsp?id=04-29-6&k=Raspberries
You can find raspberry's great works at;
allpoetry.com/poets/raspberry
Written August 29th, 2005
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Kiran, WOW Nobody has looked at this one for a while. Raspberry is such a fine poet and when the contest that this was entered into came up I knew it was time to honor her as such. I'm very happy you enjoyed and I hope you have some raspberries on hand to satisfy the hunger for them. LOL Thank you so much for your wonderful words, they mean very much to me. Love and blessings for you, today and always.
Joyce
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A brilliant acrostic and what a great picture of raspberries...i'm so hungry for them now!!!! Well done with this!
Kiran -
Seamless, I'm very happy that you enjoyed my poem for Raspberry. She is a lovely poet and a wonderful person from what I can tell. I will gladly check out your work. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment after reading.
Love and blessings for the sunniest of days to you.
Joyce
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Good
I like this poem! You should check out my poems. -
Marianne, At least you didn't give the raspberry to my work. LOL
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Again, I thank you not only for your words but for hosting as well. Take care and best wishes to you for the sunniest of days. Joyce
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Phoenix, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment you left. It was very complimentary and I appreciate it so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and so sorry for making you hungry. LOL
Joyce
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I want Raspberries now!!! LOL
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Great. Sweet (and tasty!)
Very sweet, and nice to see longer sentences. More often acrostics these days become short, sharp and to a point. I like the use of the picture, though you've made me hungry now! -
Pam, Thank you for the applause and the wonderful comment you left for me. You always bring a smile to my face with your words whether I am reading your work or your comments. Thank you again so much my friend it is very inspiring. Joyce
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Excellent
A lovely acrostic dedication. You truly do have a way with these. Excellent! ~Pam
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Deborah, Thank you again for the lovely words of praise and the applause they both mean so much to me. I will look forward to seeing some new works from the first poet to critique my work that I put on this site over a month ago now. Darn it, I missed my own one month anniversary...LOL Much happy writing to you. Joyce
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Gosh, my head is going to swell...LOL Thank you sis for the praise you show me with your words. You know it was from reading your works that I got inspiration to start writing myself. Love ya sis, Joyce
P.S. Thank you for the applause too. Forgot to add that in the first time around...
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Another great acrostic! Hmm... I'm going to have to go back to work and start writing some more. Gotta catch up with some of your wonderful writes here! Cheers!
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excellent
ah another excellent poem ,I knew you could do poetry, as you do so well keep the ink a flowing Love Ya sis,``Linda -
Jim, Thank you for the lovely comment, I do enjoy the acrostics very much. You know it would be my pleasure to write one for you. Your words are always inspiring just like your works. Keep your eyes peeled...LOL
Joyce
P.S. Thanks so much for the applause too, just saw that in the messages section. They sneak by on you, always have to go and look.
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raspberry, Thank you so much for the applause and for the lovely comment you made on the work. I thank you for hosting the contest and just to let you know that last part in my comments box wasn't meant for you...LOL It was meant for those who tend to click on the featured poems and not leave anything at all. You always leave a note for your fellow readers. In closing I say Kudos to you my fellow poet for all that you give to us. Joyce
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Nice acrostic, Joyce! You have a nice ability to write acrostic poems, and you honor the poets you write about. I wondered if you would care to honor me with an acrostic aswell?
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Thank you for the wonderful comment on my work, although I know her only as raspberry she brings joy to my heart every time I read one of her works. I felt it was a way to show her just that. Joyce
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I've always had a love for acrostics, and this is no exception! I found it both cute and heartwarming to see such a tribute to a good friend. I can only say from this point in my life that it is great to see people can love each other so much :-) Good friends are so hard to find thses days. Great ones even more so. Enjoyed it thouroughly . . . okay I never know how to end one of these things :-P
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Like a sunshine to a winter's night Damn cute and I just love this piece.. Who will not like it.. when it soo full of love ?? Apart from all that.. the rhyme scheme was perfect and the flow was flawless.. I generally find them lacking in acrostics.. but this one is an Exception Very good..
A personal nore : Thanks for this lovely acrostic.. I will treasure this and I did not read this from the featured column dear.. Lovely and thanks for entering the contest
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Jake, Glad you enjoyed it. She deserves the praise for sure.
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it very much.
Joyce
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Cute acrostic, like it very much, and well written for raspberry.
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