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heart that finally felt love

the agony that surrounds her soul
as the pain makes her heart cold
the cuts she place on her self was pain that always felt
the scars she kept reminded  her she was alone
she sit there and wonder why should she  live when all she does is go through misery all over again
as things got worse and she was so close to suicide
she met this guy
he told many nice things but she was brain wash from things  people told her and told self
she was confused to what to feel
he spent day  byday with her and made her heart no longer made her feel cold
she felt one thing that made her feel happy it was love

Author notes

this is too my love  he know who he is
Written August 28th, 2005

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