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im not your whore anymore

Why do you have to be so mean?
You treat me like im property
you dont care about me,
as long as i do what u say.
then when i leave you,
you have the nerve to ask why?

You humilate me in public,
you embarass me in front of my friends.
an you wonder why i hate you.

you hit me,
you abuse me,
you treat me like im an object.
an you think its funny.

stay away from me,
im not your whore anymore!

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Written August 28th, 2005

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  • Dork87
    August 31, 2005
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    wow thats a strong message i like the poem lol and your veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery long intro/bio